Form: Critique

  • (nonsense) (Ah… now I see the problem with the Season: 1) You didn’t solve the

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    (Ah… now I see the problem with the Season: 1) You didn’t solve the problem of giving Jeffrey the necessary dialog, and didn’t use extra time to help understand his confusion 2) The Episode five Japanese episode was a waste of an episode (don’t make excuses, yes it was), and so was the first half of episode six. 3) Seven lacked character empathy, and seven and eight should have been merged. 3) and the last episode needed to be split in two with more patient cuts, 3) you blew it with the closure on Harris’ character which needed him to find the port in his arm, so we could be confused about when he’d died rather than confused. So in retrospect, the season was ok, but (a) Wright isn’t Harris or Hopkins and couldn’t pull it off with the dialog you gave him (understandably) and didn’t fight you over it. (b) you didn’t put give enough frames for the actors to emote (and us to empathize) in the choppy episodes, and should have cut episode five and first half of six as unnecessary and self indulgent, (c) a split six and seven instead, then been more … loving … (paying attention) in nine and ten. … Yeah. I know. Luxury of hindsight but yo didn’t make these mistakes in the first season. Why? You weren’t stepping back enough. PLEASE DO NOT PULL A “LOST” ON US. -Thanks. )


    Source date (UTC): 2018-06-27 15:10:00 UTC

  • To answer the question: Yes, Westworld (Nolan and Joy) just pulled another “Lost

    To answer the question: Yes, Westworld (Nolan and Joy) just pulled another “Lost”. In science fiction you only get one ‘gimme’. That’s the observation of Asimov and Clarke. And I’ve never seen it falsified. I bet I know why too – Nolan handed over writing to Joy.


    Source date (UTC): 2018-06-27 13:18:00 UTC

    Original post: https://twitter.com/i/web/status/1011961847258501120

  • Curt Doolittle updated his status. To answer the question: Yes, Westworld (Nolan

    Curt Doolittle updated his status.

    To answer the question: Yes, Westworld (Nolan and Joy) just pulled another “Lost”. In science fiction you only get one ‘gimme’. That’s the observation of Asimov and Clarke. And I’ve never seen it falsified. The episodes varied between overly concentrated and too calm, and overly dense and too disjointed to suspend disbelief. the heaven (door) and the indians jumping off the cliff was weak. the reversal of the two women was cunning. the closure with the man in black was … lame. It would have been better to have him discover he’d already been replaced successfully and be happy with his success at transformation. I bet I know why these failures too – Nolan handed over writing to Joy and she handed over direction to women. Men create models, women create experiences. And only models survive tests in reality. Single authors create worlds. Multiple authors violate them.


    Source date (UTC): 2018-06-27 13:17:49 UTC

  • To answer the question: Yes, Westworld (Nolan and Joy) just pulled another “Lost

    To answer the question: Yes, Westworld (Nolan and Joy) just pulled another “Lost”. In science fiction you only get one ‘gimme’. That’s the observation of Asimov and Clarke. And I’ve never seen it falsified. The episodes varied between overly concentrated and too calm, and overly dense and too disjointed to suspend disbelief. the heaven (door) and the indians jumping off the cliff was weak. the reversal of the two women was cunning. the closure with the man in black was … lame. It would have been better to have him discover he’d already been replaced successfully and be happy with his success at transformation. I bet I know why these failures too – Nolan handed over writing to Joy and she handed over direction to women. Men create models, women create experiences. And only models survive tests in reality. Single authors create worlds. Multiple authors violate them.


    Source date (UTC): 2018-06-27 09:17:00 UTC

  • The Academy Like Hollywood Produces Worse Work Products than Individual Craftsman in Either Industry

    Um. helps to keep in mind that the academy provides funding for thought and obviously subsidizes bad thought. Whereas thought leadership in history did not come from the academy but from wealth sufficient for literacy and time for study. In other words, it is not clear that the academy produces better intellectual work products than individual craftsmen, any more than Hollywood produces better art products than individual craftsmen. And the evidence appears overwhelmingly the opposite: that the academy, entertainment industry, media, and democratic state, produce higher volumes of bad quality everything.

  • The Academy Like Hollywood Produces Worse Work Products than Individual Craftsman in Either Industry

    Um. helps to keep in mind that the academy provides funding for thought and obviously subsidizes bad thought. Whereas thought leadership in history did not come from the academy but from wealth sufficient for literacy and time for study. In other words, it is not clear that the academy produces better intellectual work products than individual craftsmen, any more than Hollywood produces better art products than individual craftsmen. And the evidence appears overwhelmingly the opposite: that the academy, entertainment industry, media, and democratic state, produce higher volumes of bad quality everything.

  • The Fallacy of Liberal Academic Achievement

    —“What I always tell people who cite more “educational achievement” among liberals, besides what this article said about how universities are really indoctrination centers, is that there is a repolarization at the top that mirrors the 50/50 split amongst the general population. Intelligence is a predictor of leftist leanings until you hit the the top one or two percent. “They don’t know what they don’t know” is basically another way of saying “A little bit of knowledge is a dangerous thing.” They get to the point of questioning preconceived notions, realizing they’re not wholly rational, but not even scratching the surface of why we developed those instincts to begin with.”– Brian McQuiston “…Not questioning why we developed those instincts to begin with…” or why a central tenet of western and eastern civilization is the warning by Icarus against hubris. Why? It counters (a) that idealism and reason can somehow compete with a market for demonstrated results, and (b) that we are unequal in every possible way and that markets are the only means of calculating coincidences of wants and needs, and (c) that because of “b”, many people are dead weight or deleterious to the group as a whole.

  • The Fallacy of Liberal Academic Achievement

    —“What I always tell people who cite more “educational achievement” among liberals, besides what this article said about how universities are really indoctrination centers, is that there is a repolarization at the top that mirrors the 50/50 split amongst the general population. Intelligence is a predictor of leftist leanings until you hit the the top one or two percent. “They don’t know what they don’t know” is basically another way of saying “A little bit of knowledge is a dangerous thing.” They get to the point of questioning preconceived notions, realizing they’re not wholly rational, but not even scratching the surface of why we developed those instincts to begin with.”– Brian McQuiston “…Not questioning why we developed those instincts to begin with…” or why a central tenet of western and eastern civilization is the warning by Icarus against hubris. Why? It counters (a) that idealism and reason can somehow compete with a market for demonstrated results, and (b) that we are unequal in every possible way and that markets are the only means of calculating coincidences of wants and needs, and (c) that because of “b”, many people are dead weight or deleterious to the group as a whole.

  • Equality? Are you kidding? One step above pets that lack house-training. They sh

    Equality? Are you kidding? One step above pets that lack house-training. They should have owners, licenses, rabies and other disease shots, and be neutered like all other domesticated pets.


    Source date (UTC): 2018-06-21 19:45:40 UTC

    Original post: https://twitter.com/i/web/status/1009885078078590976

  • Answering a Presumptuous Critic

    (From Original Post: https://www.facebook.com/curt.doolittle/posts/10156430444672264) Lets get posturing out of the way first: I can judge from your argument and sentence structure I have somewhere in the vicinity of 15-30 IQ points on you (at a minimum), from your activity stream, far greater agency, have built multiple technology companies of scale, and am in the process of making a more than marginal contribution to human thought. That’s said, if we’re both done with appeals to achievement, let’s go through what non-argument you’re making and see if there is anything to it or not. Now onto discussion. 1. Original criticism makes two accusations: (a) pseudoscience, and (b) poor or lazy writing. The second (c) mentions something about scientific laws. As for (b), I don’t ‘dumb down’ my sentences in the postwar model. I’m perfectly happy with Jefferson, Lincoln, and Seneca’s prose. Writing for publication is different from sketching for followers. Dumbing it down is work I avoid. In fact, the higher on the Flesch Kincaid scale my writing lands, the more natural it is for me. (You clearly haven’t read Menger or Kant.) Although followers do say that experience with latin grammar is helpful. But yes, the accusation of laziness is correct. Although I consider it economically. It’s not worth my time to invest the extra effort. As for (a) Pseudoscience, well, I think we can address that with a little effort below. As for (c) “scientific laws”, I said “science and law” meaning that both the hard sciences and law require operational prose. This is logical because in large part, western civilization has always relied upon tort (empirical law) into prehistory, and our discourse, debate, law, reason, and science, all developed out of that prior influence. However, to put a sharper point on it. In the sequence: free association > hypothesis > theory > law > convention, each interstitial consists of a method of falsification. And whether a law consists of a mathematical expression of constant relations in deterministic (physical) or a verbal expression of constant relations in semi-deterministic (behavioral), is merely dependent upon the determinism of the discipline. Most economic laws can only be expressed symbolically because the categories change. Most physical laws can, in addition, be expressed mathematically for the simple reason that the categories do not change. “The universe can’t choose to outwit itself. Humans choose to outwit the universe and capture the difference in calories.” 2. Regarding: —“Also, no matter what language scientists write in, the rules of grammar of that language apply, as do the majority of the terms used therein.”— This statement depends on whether you use the definition of grammar of (a) the 19th and early 20th century (normatively) that was developed for mass education, or (b) the definition of grammar of the enlightenment prior to the revolutionary wars, and definition of grammar of the post-Turing (postwar) period (Operationally) (Chomsky). I use the latter: Universal Grammar > Generative Grammar > Rules of continuous, recursive disambiguation. Secondly, once one defines grammar “operationally” not “normatively”, as Continuous Recursive Disambiguation, one is forced to reorganize Semantics(dimensions of reference) as limited by grammar (rules of continuous disambiguation). Thirdly, once we do so, we discover that we have produced many, many ‘grammars’ (rules of continuous disambiguation, each limiting or expanding semantic dimensions), including Mathematical (positional), Logical (dimensional), Operational (actions), Procedural(programming), Contracts(property), Testimony(observability), Ordinary Language, Narrative, fictional, and the Fictionalisms. Fourth; once we account for the influence that the work of Popper Kuhn thru Kripke, and the work of Brouwer(physics), Bridgman(Math), Mises (economics), and the Operational, Operationalist, Intuitionistic, movements have had on the sciences, we see that the current language of at least the physical sciences is limited to Operational Grammar (and semantics). And that this difference in grammars separates the sciences (hard) from the pseudosciences (soft): psychology, sociology, literature, pseudo-history, theology, philosophy. Fifth, Operational grammar contains the most observable (empirical), least inflationary and conflationary (most deflationary) and most correspondent description (Testimony) that is possible – and therefore the most parsimonious in information EVEN IF FAR MORE PEDANTIC IN PROSE. Although we can, at some point, reduce SOME phenomenon to mathematical descriptions (constant relations) as long as the relations (categories, relations and values) are constant (physical world). Even if we cannot always do so because the relations are inconstant (economics, sentience). Although we have discovered that all economic phenomenon produce some set of symmetries (lie groups etc) which show that even in economics the hierarchy of the physical word (subatomic, atomic, chemical, biochemical, biological, ecological) also applies to a lesser degree to the discretionary (less deterministic) phenomenon that includes human memory, forecasting, and choice. CLOSING As far as I know I have no peers in these matters. As far as I know you have just stumbled onto one of my sketches, made for my followers, and either presumed you understood, or counter-signaled against prose you couldn’t understand. I don’t know. I just know it is in the nature of men to police the commons and you think that is what you are doing. Well done. But with this ‘crime’ brought before the judge so to speak, you merely err in your accusation. -Cheers