One of the better amature attempts I’ve seen. Does avoid any nonsense claims or

One of the better amature attempts I’ve seen. Does avoid any nonsense claims or magical thinking (very nice), doesn’t solve the central problems of modernity (lying), but does create a decent government for managing a small homogeneous polity. So in that sense ‘well done’.

What I’d suggest for your further thought, is you try to address the tendency of religions, cults including philosophical and pseudoscientific cults, academics, and politicians, to sell false and impossible promises that the physical behavioral and evolutionary laws of nature are avoidable or escapable, and the tendency of the unfit to demand redistributions, and the tendency of women to avoid all possible responsibility for self or commons and to vote for them.

The only reason to have the crisis of the present – and every major crisis since the 1890s, is the sale of false and impossible promises, and the introgression of non-europeans, then our working classes , and then women, into the polity. Because theyu’re the groups that vote for irresponsibility. And what you’ve proposed is a contractual government for those who are willing to act responsibly – without excluding the ability to sell false promises (frauds), and/or excluding those who demonstrate evasion of those responsibilities, and/or those who would vote for those irresponsibilities. 😉

All in all well done. (I assume you’re under 30, and likely under 25, and so that’s pretty good work for the present day). 😉